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Manuscript - 1983

the condition

all up and down the avenues
the people are in pain;
they sleep in pain, they awaken
in pain;
even the buildings are in pain,
the bridges
the flowers are in pain
and there is no release-
pain sits
pain floats
pain waits
pain is.

don't ask why there are
drunks
drug addicts
suicides

the music is bad
and the love
and the script:

this place now
as I type this

or as you read this:
your place now.
    
War All The Time - 1984

the condition

all up and down the avenues
the people are in pain;
they sleep in pain, they awaken
in pain;
even the buildings are in pain,
the bridges
the flowers are in pain
and there is no release-
pain sits
pain floats
pain waits
pain is.

don't ask why there are
drunks
drug addicts
suicides

the music is bad
and the love
and the script:

this place now
as I type this

or as you read this:
your place now.
 The Continual Condition - 2009

the continual condition

all up and down the avenues
the people are in pain;
they sleep in pain, they awaken
in pain;
even the buildings are in pain,
the bridges,
the flowers are in pain
and there is nothing
going to
release it,
release us;
pain sits, pain floats, pain
waits;
pain is.

the music is bad
and the love
and the script

in this place now
as I type this

or as you read this
in your place now.